fingerpaint the sky

till everything shines


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Just FYI, I continue to love this to a RIDICULOUS DEGREE. Not, uh, that this is news or anything. (teeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeam!)

I, uh, forgot to credit you for betaing. That's part of the blaming! Er.

THANK YOU FOR ENABLING AND ALSO CATCHING MY DUMB STUFF.

Dude, you wrote it so I didn't have to! THAT'S GOOD ENOUGH. *laughing*

It's okay, I'll make you write other stuff. *serene*

The colonel's standing two yards closer -- well, he would, and it's not as if he's got anything to worry about -- and his coattails keep billowing. It's a very dramatic silhouette, and Jean is privately sure that's the entire reason the bastard colonel wears his coat so often. Hell, he probably maneuvers the air or something to make it billow more.

YOU HAD ME AT THIS. ^^^^^^^^^^^^

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YOU KNOW HE DOES.

*giggling* Thank you!

You are both terrible and awesome.

Jeeze.

Oh this is good. I really need to watch FMA in order so I know what's going on other than ooh awesome.

You should! Um, mostly because it's genuinely an awesome anime. One of the best shows of any genre I've seen in a long while.

But I'm very glad you liked the fic anyway! :D (And it's pre-canon, so you don't actually need to know a lot for this story. Knowing backstory helps, but is not actually necessary.)

It's nice to read something well done for a change. All Ive seen lately is my subpar "poetry", and the stuff other people in my class pass off as "creative writing".

Thank you kindly.

Hey, now. Poetry is a far different beast! And a very different thing to write. What you're working on is a different thing from this, where my thought process basically went, "And then Hawkeye can CHARGE AT THE FIRE. And Havoc is awesome! Hee hee hee."

But thank you very much for the compliment! I'm very glad you liked it.

Oh, AWESOME.

Hawkeye <3 <3 <3 <3

That was terrific. Everybody is so in character. Hawkeye rocks, jumping right into the fire to get a better angle - totally pragmatic, and completely trusting in Roy. Havoc's POV is great, too.

The colonel's standing two yards closer -- well, he would, and it's not as if he's got anything to worry about -- and his coattails keep billowing. It's a very dramatic silhouette, and Jean is privately sure that's the entire reason the bastard colonel wears his coat so often. Hell, he probably maneuvers the air or something to make it billow more.

Hah. How very true. :D

Thank you so much!

And I maybe had fun with Havoc, yeah. He gets to snark at Mustang in his head! I love to affectionately mock Mustang in my head! It works out well. Also, I love him (and the entire team, and everybody) in general.

Please excuse me. I'll just be over here, DYING OF AWESOME.

Also since this is like the third time I've run at one of your older posts screeching YOU'RE AWESOME at the top of my lungs, would you mind terribly if I added you as a friend?

I wouldn't mind in the least! I would be entirely gratified and add you right back, in fact.

I'm glad you liked the fic! I maaaaaaybe had some fun with it. Maybe. *grin*

Hi, random dude following your comment on peri_peteia's post here, but I just wanted to say that this is amazing. Roy and Riza, and Havoc watching and starting to understand them, and Roy's billowy coat, and everything. Thumbs up to you.

Thank you so much! I'm tickled to have random passersby, and I'm delighted you enjoyed the fic! I had a lot of fun with it.

Oh this is EXCELLENT.

I looove how you write Havoc and the third party view of Roy and Riza and their interactions is beautifully done.

Eeeee, thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

I discovered in the process of this fic that Havoc is a tremendously fun POV to write. (Also, I'm a sucker for third party views of undertone-laden relationships. Win-win!)

Oh my gosh, I ADORE this fic! (I have a weakness for OTP-type fic from the viewpoint of a third person and, man, this one really hits it out of the park!)

The atmosphere of combined danger and routine is really perfect for these characters. Love ALL the details! <333

Thank you so much! (I have a giant weakness for that too, so I'm delighted to hear that it worked for somebody else!)

This is great. I like writing about Mustang and his group too, but I can't write combat. This is awesome.

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I have entirely too much fun writing fight scenes. I suck at writing a lot of dialogue and banter without a fight scene or something to stick it in, though, so I guess it evens out. *grin*

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